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My new story....which is actually my old story.

 
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babytess6693
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 8:11 pm    Post subject: My new story....which is actually my old story. Reply with quote

http://archiveofourown.org/works/976829/chapters/1921597

Can someone please read this and tell me what's wrong with it?

You know, besides the grammar.
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sybil
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2014 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I started a review, but it over ran the 4300 word limit--I used a lot of big spaces and re quoted stuff, and left message to contact me at my E-mail, so I can send an attachment to yours. So reply here, I guess, to where to send your feed back.

I'm glad you care!

cumaensibyl@yahoo.com
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babytess6693
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sybil wrote:
I started a review, but it over ran the 4300 word limit--I used a lot of big spaces and re quoted stuff, and left message to contact me at my E-mail, so I can send an attachment to yours. So reply here, I guess, to where to send your feed back.

I'm glad you care!

cumaensibyl@yahoo.com
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sybil


Please tell me everything that you think. Smile
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sybil
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 26, 2014 6:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

D'oh!

I didn't think of our PM right here. So I will reply to your PM with just a couple of reactionary and not well conceived responses.

You can see I am not a writer that I was actually asking for you to E mail me so I could send the post to your e mail since that Archive site disallowed the number of letters.

As I am working so hard on RL and trying to cold cut my own work prior IWRY, please understand I am not a trained writer, reader, editor, and I only hope to help, not harm or cause confusion--which is obvious I do! And I am sorry to do that to your inspiration and efforts.

UM kay. Replying to your 8/8 PM to me.

And thank you.

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